
Here are her compositions:
The Clock
One day my father climbed
into the clock
to make it ding.
He was the dinger.
I thought it was the clock.
One day my father climbed
into the clock
to make it ding.
He was the dinger.
I thought it was the clock.
The Rain on My Head
The sun shone on my head,
so hot that the sweat came down
from my head like raindrops.
The Hurricane
The baby goes from room to room
making a mess like a hurricane.
The Monkey
My monkey brother climbs, climbs, climbs
in our jungle house.
The Dust Storm
The dust rolls out like a sleeping bag
spreading out to be slept on.
The sun shone on my head,
so hot that the sweat came down
from my head like raindrops.
The Hurricane
The baby goes from room to room
making a mess like a hurricane.
The Monkey
My monkey brother climbs, climbs, climbs
in our jungle house.
The Dust Storm
The dust rolls out like a sleeping bag
spreading out to be slept on.
I admit I'm extremely biased, but I was impressed! We both had so much fun that we will definitely be writing more soon.
I am impressed also and look forward to reading more from this new little poet.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite is The Hurricane. Good imagery!
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